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Nervartius Fullmoon breathed out, watching his breath curl into the freezing air like smoke. Snow feel softly around him, and the wind softly rustled the trees bare branches. He blinked his blue eyes, looking up at the gray sky. Sighing, he turned around and thrust his bare hands into his jacket pockets as he started to trudge back through the forest back to his house. As the small structure slowly grew closer, a small black cat leaped down from a tree in the yard and sprinted over to greet him. Narv bent, a small smile playing around his lips as he rubbed the cat around her ears and slowly down her back, a loud purr tumbling out from between her jaws. He stretched out and arm, and the cat padded up it and curled her body into his jacket hoodie, rubbing her face into the fur lining. Carefully standing, Narv walked up to the porch steps, jumping over the cracked bottom one lightly with his orange converse sneakers. He reached around his head and gently pulled the cat from his hood where she purred happily. He smiled at her cute look, and kissed her head before putting her down and opening the door to the house. Entering, Narv slammed the door shut and shrugged off his jacket, throwing it onto a nearby chair before assaulting his shoes off his feet.
"Narv, is that you?" a voice yelled from two rooms over, partly muffled by the sound of the tv and running furnace.
"Yea mom. I'm gonna go play on the computer a bit, Okay?" Narv moving into the kitchen, rummaging through the fridge and pulling out a Propel zero and taking a quick chug before also grabbing a roll from the top.

Sounds good:)